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Hermon - the highest mountain in Israel: 2224 m above sea level. Overall 7% of the Hermon is Israel, and the remaining 93% divided between Syria and Lebanon. The highest peak (3088 m) - in Lebanon. Ski resort in Israel, the word is very difficult to imagine but, nevertheless, in Israel, 65% of which is desert, everything is possible! Ramat Shalom Resort, located at Mount Hermon - the highest point of Israel, the only country where snow remains all winter, creating conditions for active recreation, with the thickness and strength of the snow cover allowed to extend it to the rare pleasure of April. The slopes of this famous mountain is cut by numerous ski slopes, for beginners, first embarked on skis, which immediately will help them to have the instructor as well as for experienced slalomistov. To start a journey on the sleds, not less lucky, the equipment, like skis, and you wish to give directly to furnished tourist base from which to the slope you reach the lift. Like most inaccessible mountains, it has since time immemorial been surrounded by halo of sanctity. People believed that on the top of Hermon inhabited by the gods. The name comes from the mountains Hebrew verb "Haram" which means "to take the vow. "
In one of the legends of this title due to the fact that the sons of pagan gods gave a vow to go down to the mountain and taken to wife the daughters of the sons of men.
Nodes Hermon are covered with snow almost to the middle of summer. In the Talmud called Hermon in Aramaic Tour Talga (Snow Mountain). The Arabs also called Hermon, snow or ice mountain - Jabal al-Talzh. White vertices are visible from afar and turban like sheikh (elder). Therefore Hermon Arabs sometimes called Jabal al-Sheikh (Mount Sheikh).
Mount Hermon is on the north, it is high, so its very cold climate in Israel and the greatest amount of precipitation falls - about 1350 mm, almost 90 days a year. Even in the summer months when there is no rain, strong winds blow. They are growing in the winter, their speed goes up to 120-150 km per hour, and they sweep the snow from public places, leaving only a thin layer polumetrovy. In closed as winds from the field formed snowdrift height of several meters, which are to spring, and sometimes until the middle of summer.
Despite the harshness of the climate (spring is coming very late), the Us has more than 250 species of plants. However, their very few at the top, but at bottom there is anything that grows in the mountains of Judea, Samaria, Caramel and the Galilee. The symbol of Hermon are cypresses. In ancient times they were used in shipbuilding. Once in the mountains lived carnivorous beasts. Bars are mentioned in the Bible, and the Syrian brown bears could be found until the beginning of XX century.
The Jews lived in the area of Hermon in the mixed, and purely Jewish settlements. Archaeologists discovered the remains of more than 40 such settlements. Houses are built with thick, sometimes double, the walls of a harsh climate. Inside the settlements ryli wells, underground caves serve as cellars or reservoirs. At the cliff have terraces on which to raise vegetables, grapes, Thinh, nuts, spices, planted gardens. Trobats winepress oil showed that there were growing olives. Land not suitable for processing, use of pasture. In addition to agriculture, probably a great pribsh bring the forest. But one of the most important articles of the income was ice. He sold wealthy people of Israel, Syria and Egypt. In the V. one of the fathers of the Christian Church Ieronim wrote: "To bring in Hermon Tire summer snow for fun. " In the field of ancient settlements are found fragments of clay vessels mostly of local manufacture. Typically, these vessels were large, roughly treated by hands, not on a potter's wheel. Along with the local pottery found imported, more beautiful. Scientists hit a network of roads linking settlements to each other. The width of these roads to reach three to four meters. Where the threatened disruption, construction of special props and strengthening.
Over the years, Jewish settlements it has become smaller. The largest community living in settlements Hatsbaya (now Lebanon). But she left the village, when in the XIX century. began the long internecine war between the Druze, Christians and Muslims.
Many Jews Hermon responded to the call of Baron Rothschild to join the construction Jewish settlements in the Galilee. Some found work as guards at the post office: Jews Hermon were excellent horsemen.
At the end of the First World War Hermon became a French mandate territory, and during the Second World War Hermon was divided between Lebanon and Syria.
During the Six Day War, the southern part of Hermon (7% of its entire territory) bsha brought the Israel Defense Army, and immediately after the war there have been equipped with silos, because the highest point in the country has enormous strategic importance. "Eyes of the country" Hermon called because here is the line of early warning for areas such as the Hula Valley, Mount Naftali and the Golan. Hermon - a great place to observe over the approaches to Damascus (Hermon peak is only 45 km from the Syrian capital). Here is a radar outpost is equipped with sensitive electronic equipment.
Since the XI century. most of the population constitute Hermon Druze. Their settlements are scattered everywhere, but mainly concentrated in the west, at the foot of the mountain. Many Druze villages in the eastern part, adjacent to Damascus. In Israel there are two villages: Majdal Shams and Ein Kiniya. Here you can meet and Christians (mostly Greek Orthodox and Greek Catholics).
Eilat
Eilat is located at the southernmost point of Israel, on the shore Eylatskogo (Aqaba) Red Sea Gulf. A further meeting with the legendary King Solomon and the Queen of Sheba Eilat has a special place, the place attracts lovers of sun and entertainment, young people and a young soul, alone, and whole families. And each of them offered Eilat and offers many interesting and remarkable...
In the Roman period was called Ayla, it housed a military garrison. And in ancient times, and in the Middle Ages on the spot Eilat almost always been a military garrison, which initially was under Egyptian rule, and then repeatedly changed hands. Who just did not attempt to master this important strategic point: the Romans, Crusaders, Turks... By the time the declaration of independence of Israel in 1948 Eilat, then a military post known as Umm Rashrash, was in Arab hands. In 1949, Eilat has been released and was rapidly evolving. Nature vylepila on the northern tip of the Red Sea port of exceptional beauty, where painted in purple hue the mountains surrounding the desert cross-cutting with white sands coral sea. It was here, at the southernmost point of Israel, and Eilat is located. Close to Eilat in the air or by land, a traveler suddenly dazzles unthinkable mirage. After a long journey through endless, colorless desert, suddenly a bright palette of colors - green palm trees swinging in the green lawns and along the sun-washed beaches, sparkling white hotel with a balcony overlooking to the sea shines like pearl, mottled bright Rainbow sails. Eilat, where the sun has received eternal residence. In Eilat mild climate even in winter, as the sun warms 359 days a year. At a time when Europe is sinking into the snow, howling winter, "winter birds" warming up in Eilat, a stark plumage. Tourists from all over the world enjoy a rare combination of sea, town and surrounding mountainous desert to offer them year round endless opportunities for recreation and entertainment. Holiday in Eilat - the perfect combination of climate and entertainment, the sea and desert, mountains and oases, the simple Bedouin cuisine and gastronomic sophistications in French restaurants. Eylatsky Bay is located in the heart of the desert and surrounded, like a wall, high mountains, resulting in high evaporation, and led to the concentration of salt in the Gulf, accounting for 4. 1%, significantly higher than sea. The water temperature never drops below 22 degrees. The combination of these factors provides the education and the existence of corals. Eylatsky Bay is the ultimate, the northern point of tropical coral reefs. Corals Red Sea coast is rather wide margin strip. Corals are a tiny living organisms that live dense colonies. Deaths organisms leave limestone skeletons. Accumulated over thousands of years, the limestone skeletons of coral reefs and form. City-Israeli port of Eilat on the Red Sea, the famous health resort and tourist center with an international airport. Here are first-class hotels and beautiful beaches. The rich underwater world Eylatskogo Gulf attracts many fans of underwater sports. One of the main sights of the water area of Eilat - coral reefs. In 1966 Eylatskoe coast was declared a nature reserve. Eilat is a free-trade zone and is separated from the rest of the Israeli Customs, located at the exit of the city. Over the past 20 years, Eilat has a prestigious reputation as a winter resort, an ideal place where you can escape from the cold of Europe, that week or two ponezhitsya under the winter sun.
Lovers of diving chosen Shmurat-Almog, coral reserve. There are all creditworthy customers rent equipment for diving, motor boats and boats. Experienced instructors provide all necessary assistance to help make the journey to the Red Sea underwater space. But to discover the underwater world of Eilat is possible not only through aqualung. Inside the Coral Reef Aquarium is a famous «Underwater world», which are so famous Eilat. At a depth of 5 meters below sea level is a round room, the walls are huge glass. Through them you can watch the life of exotic fish and other marine creatures living in the Red Sea. Every day at the diving center «Dolphin Reef» You can walk to the sea in the company of dolphins butylkonosyh. The cost of this pleasure is very reasonable.
How to get to Eilat: four hours of flight Eilat is separated from Europe: 1 / 2 hours - from Tel Aviv or Jerusalem. Regular bus service connects with all parts of Eilat in Israel. You can come on their own or rented car.
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In one of the legends of this title due to the fact that the sons of pagan gods gave a vow to go down to the mountain and taken to wife the daughters of the sons of men.
Nodes Hermon are covered with snow almost to the middle of summer. In the Talmud called Hermon in Aramaic Tour Talga (Snow Mountain). The Arabs also called Hermon, snow or ice mountain - Jabal al-Talzh. White vertices are visible from afar and turban like sheikh (elder). Therefore Hermon Arabs sometimes called Jabal al-Sheikh (Mount Sheikh).
Mount Hermon is on the north, it is high, so its very cold climate in Israel and the greatest amount of precipitation falls - about 1350 mm, almost 90 days a year. Even in the summer months when there is no rain, strong winds blow. They are growing in the winter, their speed goes up to 120-150 km per hour, and they sweep the snow from public places, leaving only a thin layer polumetrovy. In closed as winds from the field formed snowdrift height of several meters, which are to spring, and sometimes until the middle of summer.
Despite the harshness of the climate (spring is coming very late), the Us has more than 250 species of plants. However, their very few at the top, but at bottom there is anything that grows in the mountains of Judea, Samaria, Caramel and the Galilee. The symbol of Hermon are cypresses. In ancient times they were used in shipbuilding. Once in the mountains lived carnivorous beasts. Bars are mentioned in the Bible, and the Syrian brown bears could be found until the beginning of XX century.
The Jews lived in the area of Hermon in the mixed, and purely Jewish settlements. Archaeologists discovered the remains of more than 40 such settlements. Houses are built with thick, sometimes double, the walls of a harsh climate. Inside the settlements ryli wells, underground caves serve as cellars or reservoirs. At the cliff have terraces on which to raise vegetables, grapes, Thinh, nuts, spices, planted gardens. Trobats winepress oil showed that there were growing olives. Land not suitable for processing, use of pasture. In addition to agriculture, probably a great pribsh bring the forest. But one of the most important articles of the income was ice. He sold wealthy people of Israel, Syria and Egypt. In the V. one of the fathers of the Christian Church Ieronim wrote: "To bring in Hermon Tire summer snow for fun. " In the field of ancient settlements are found fragments of clay vessels mostly of local manufacture. Typically, these vessels were large, roughly treated by hands, not on a potter's wheel. Along with the local pottery found imported, more beautiful. Scientists hit a network of roads linking settlements to each other. The width of these roads to reach three to four meters. Where the threatened disruption, construction of special props and strengthening.
Over the years, Jewish settlements it has become smaller. The largest community living in settlements Hatsbaya (now Lebanon). But she left the village, when in the XIX century. began the long internecine war between the Druze, Christians and Muslims.
Many Jews Hermon responded to the call of Baron Rothschild to join the construction Jewish settlements in the Galilee. Some found work as guards at the post office: Jews Hermon were excellent horsemen.
At the end of the First World War Hermon became a French mandate territory, and during the Second World War Hermon was divided between Lebanon and Syria.
During the Six Day War, the southern part of Hermon (7% of its entire territory) bsha brought the Israel Defense Army, and immediately after the war there have been equipped with silos, because the highest point in the country has enormous strategic importance. "Eyes of the country" Hermon called because here is the line of early warning for areas such as the Hula Valley, Mount Naftali and the Golan. Hermon - a great place to observe over the approaches to Damascus (Hermon peak is only 45 km from the Syrian capital). Here is a radar outpost is equipped with sensitive electronic equipment.
Since the XI century. most of the population constitute Hermon Druze. Their settlements are scattered everywhere, but mainly concentrated in the west, at the foot of the mountain. Many Druze villages in the eastern part, adjacent to Damascus. In Israel there are two villages: Majdal Shams and Ein Kiniya. Here you can meet and Christians (mostly Greek Orthodox and Greek Catholics).
Eilat
Eilat is located at the southernmost point of Israel, on the shore Eylatskogo (Aqaba) Red Sea Gulf. A further meeting with the legendary King Solomon and the Queen of Sheba Eilat has a special place, the place attracts lovers of sun and entertainment, young people and a young soul, alone, and whole families. And each of them offered Eilat and offers many interesting and remarkable...
In the Roman period was called Ayla, it housed a military garrison. And in ancient times, and in the Middle Ages on the spot Eilat almost always been a military garrison, which initially was under Egyptian rule, and then repeatedly changed hands. Who just did not attempt to master this important strategic point: the Romans, Crusaders, Turks... By the time the declaration of independence of Israel in 1948 Eilat, then a military post known as Umm Rashrash, was in Arab hands. In 1949, Eilat has been released and was rapidly evolving. Nature vylepila on the northern tip of the Red Sea port of exceptional beauty, where painted in purple hue the mountains surrounding the desert cross-cutting with white sands coral sea. It was here, at the southernmost point of Israel, and Eilat is located. Close to Eilat in the air or by land, a traveler suddenly dazzles unthinkable mirage. After a long journey through endless, colorless desert, suddenly a bright palette of colors - green palm trees swinging in the green lawns and along the sun-washed beaches, sparkling white hotel with a balcony overlooking to the sea shines like pearl, mottled bright Rainbow sails. Eilat, where the sun has received eternal residence. In Eilat mild climate even in winter, as the sun warms 359 days a year. At a time when Europe is sinking into the snow, howling winter, "winter birds" warming up in Eilat, a stark plumage. Tourists from all over the world enjoy a rare combination of sea, town and surrounding mountainous desert to offer them year round endless opportunities for recreation and entertainment. Holiday in Eilat - the perfect combination of climate and entertainment, the sea and desert, mountains and oases, the simple Bedouin cuisine and gastronomic sophistications in French restaurants. Eylatsky Bay is located in the heart of the desert and surrounded, like a wall, high mountains, resulting in high evaporation, and led to the concentration of salt in the Gulf, accounting for 4. 1%, significantly higher than sea. The water temperature never drops below 22 degrees. The combination of these factors provides the education and the existence of corals. Eylatsky Bay is the ultimate, the northern point of tropical coral reefs. Corals Red Sea coast is rather wide margin strip. Corals are a tiny living organisms that live dense colonies. Deaths organisms leave limestone skeletons. Accumulated over thousands of years, the limestone skeletons of coral reefs and form. City-Israeli port of Eilat on the Red Sea, the famous health resort and tourist center with an international airport. Here are first-class hotels and beautiful beaches. The rich underwater world Eylatskogo Gulf attracts many fans of underwater sports. One of the main sights of the water area of Eilat - coral reefs. In 1966 Eylatskoe coast was declared a nature reserve. Eilat is a free-trade zone and is separated from the rest of the Israeli Customs, located at the exit of the city. Over the past 20 years, Eilat has a prestigious reputation as a winter resort, an ideal place where you can escape from the cold of Europe, that week or two ponezhitsya under the winter sun.
Lovers of diving chosen Shmurat-Almog, coral reserve. There are all creditworthy customers rent equipment for diving, motor boats and boats. Experienced instructors provide all necessary assistance to help make the journey to the Red Sea underwater space. But to discover the underwater world of Eilat is possible not only through aqualung. Inside the Coral Reef Aquarium is a famous «Underwater world», which are so famous Eilat. At a depth of 5 meters below sea level is a round room, the walls are huge glass. Through them you can watch the life of exotic fish and other marine creatures living in the Red Sea. Every day at the diving center «Dolphin Reef» You can walk to the sea in the company of dolphins butylkonosyh. The cost of this pleasure is very reasonable.
How to get to Eilat: four hours of flight Eilat is separated from Europe: 1 / 2 hours - from Tel Aviv or Jerusalem. Regular bus service connects with all parts of Eilat in Israel. You can come on their own or rented car.
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